get up and try again

so nathan (part owner of quills coffee) didn't go for the first two quills shirts. which to be honest, i totally understand why. they are too intense.  the only reason i submitted them is because i spent so much time on them, and needed to be told to drop it and move on.  so once i got news that these initial two wouldn't work i started plugging away at this.  i feel like this design is more accessible to a broader group of people, but still has qualities of something less accessible.